▶ Your Answer :In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author's claim that the hammerhead shark have some specific evolutionary merit than other species of shark. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point. ^ First, the professor contends that the unique structure of the hammerhead shark's head is not useful. It is bBecause, they do not don't see preys in blind spot. So, they have are no advantage about vision compared to the other sharks. This casts doubt on the reading passage's suggestion that head of the hammerhead shark enhance their vision. ^ Next, the professor insists that there is no scientific proof that the shape of the hammerhead shark's head gives it a better sense of smell than other sharks. Other sharks also have a good sense of smell. For example, they can smell the blood of distant preys. This counters the reading passage's assertion that the hammerhead shark has a good sense of smell rather than other sharks. ^ Finally, the professor argues that it is not true that the hammerhead's unique head shape allows the animal to turn quickly. According to the observation of videotapes, there is no amplification that the hammerhead steer in one direction or another with just slight movements of its head. Scientists say that flexible backbone of the hammerhead shark allows the shark to turn quickly. This refutes the reading passage's claim that the hammerhead can turn quickly thanks to the shark's unique head shape.
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첫번째 본문 -because 주어+동사 는 불완전한 문장입니다. 주어+동사 because 주어+동사 혹은 because 주어+동사, 주어 +동사 해주세요. -축약형 지양해주세요. don't-->do not -~를 가진다는 have가 더 어울립니다
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