Undoubtedly,
family plays a significant role in people’s daily lives in many of the places
where they work or play. Some people think that today the extended family is
less important than it was in the past, while others do not. Both sides may
have their own reasons to support their views. If I were asked to choose one, I
would say that the value of the extended family today is less important than it
was in the past. There are several reasons as follows. (인트로 매우 좋습니다)
To begin with,
today’s people do not have enough time being to
be with their extended family for getting achievements for themselves. As the
modern society is becoming specialized and competitive, today’s job market
requires job candidates with such professionalism. Having professionalism
requires them to spend most of their time in the
company or school by developing to develop
their expertise to achieve success. Spending most of their time to succeed
This is likely to discourage people from keeping keep in touch with their extended
family. For example, when I was in a high school, I had visited
my grandparent every weekend and helped them for farming in farming, so I was able to strengthen my emotional bond and feelings of security. However,
after going to a university, I realized that my punctuality and diligence for
studying can help me raise my academic grades, while being with grandparents
could negatively affect my grades. I started to spend my whole time studying
all academic subjects for my majors by being more diligent, passionate, and
self-disciplined. Although I made constant effort, it was not easy because
everyone was working as hard as I was. I stayed in my home by focusing and focused on my major subjects without visiting my
grandparents. Eventually, I was able to get a
job as an education specialist in Japan-Cambodia International Cooperation
Agency two years ago by graduating at the top of class. Without giving up time being
to be with grandparents, I would have fallen
behind.
All things considered, I
strongly believe that today the importance of the extended family is less
important than that of in the past for those reasons I have mentioned above.
All in all, this trend will continue and pass down to the next generation.