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A substantial number of people believe that
movies and television have more positive impacts than negative impacts on young
people. However, in my opinion, nowadays movies and television negatively affect
young people. This is because many movies and TV programs are violent, and they
occasionally show unfair situations.
To begin with, most movies and TV programs
are violent, and this would make young people commit serious crimes. This is
mainly because young people are easily affected by mass media, and they want to
mimic what they see on the screen. In these days, even some programs for
children are also violent, so watching movies and television is not considered
educational. According to a research conducted by Seoul National University in
2015, teen crime rate in Seoul increased by 37% in 2014, compared to the
previous year. Moreover, 78% of the suspects who are related to these crimes
mentioned that they were affected by violent action movies released in 2014. Also,
the research has shown that the suspects used to imitate the crime patterns that
they watched on the screen. This implies that nowadays violent movies and TV
programs harm young people, and this result in the increase of teen crime rate.
On top of that, movies and television sometimes
show unfair situations, and these situations have negative impacts on young
people. In fact, good characters do not always succeed in the movies, but bad characters
sometimes succeed and beat good people by illegal actions or frauds. Also, in
some soap operas, villains make a lot of money by committing serious crimes,
and they live peacefully without any troubles. These stories would negatively
influence young people, and some of them might wrongly understand the society
they are belonging to. For instance, an action movie regarding teen swindlers’ friendship
and success released in 2014, and it became so popular for younger generations.
However, many children who watched it wrongly understood that the illegal actions
done by teen actors can be justified, and some of them wanted to become swindlers
in the future. As this example demonstrates, the partial situations in the movie
and the television programs would negatively affect young people.
To sum up, movies and television programs
show violent and unfair situations, and these situations have negative impact
upon young people. In this regard, I strongly agree that nowadays movies and
television have more negative influences than positive impacts on young people.
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