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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. |
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▶ Your Answer :
An intriguing topic of discussion at hand is whether working for 3 days a week and longer hours is more pleasant than doing for 5 days a week and shorter hours. The answer to this question can vary greatly depending on individual perspectives. Thus, the jury may be out, but as far as I am concerned, I tend to disagree with the statement. In this essay, I will explore the two main reasons as follows.
To begin with, a job with shorter hours allows people to take pleasure with family at night. While longer hours at workplace inhibit family from enjoying quality time, finishing work earlier makes all the family members happier. For example, as a working daddy, my previous job would often render me guilty when I come back home late at night and see my kids sleeping. This is attributed to the reason that we cherish every moment with family having memorable time together. Fortunately, after I moved to the present employment which ends at 5 o'clock, we all acknowledge that this current job changes me to a family-oriented father. Although I get less day off than the old job, these opportunities to meet my children at the time are worth working for shorter hours.
Secondly, too much day off can cause difficulty catching up works at workplace. This is mainly because a lot of changes are going on during my day off, so it would affect efficiency of the given tasks. According to a survey recently conducted, office workers having more than 3 days off were asked if their work goes smoothly. Only a few people responded that they do not have any troubles since their tasks are given on a daily basis. However, the majority of workers reported that it generally takes a lot of time to keep updated of what happened during they are not at work. This shows that a job with less day off can be efficient to continue their work without extra unnecessary effort.
In conclusion, I strongly argue my standpoint on account of the two reasons mentioned above. Although the verdict may still be out, I believe that the two of my rationales are sufficiently convincing enough to represent the majority of people who are favor in my claim. |
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