Some people think that a city should destroy its old, historical buildings
and replace them with more modern buildings
rather than to preserve them. However, I believe
that the city should prevent old and historical buildings. This is because the
historical buildings can lead the city’s development, while
destroying historical buildings them and replace
replacing them with the modern buildings
would blur the city’s identity.
First, destroying historical buildings and replace replacing them with the modern buildings can
prevent to preserve the city’s identity. Understanding the importance of the understanding
city’s history and the potential role of historical structures is are necessary to substantiate this view. All of
the people in the world is are a part of subsequent history. Also, every people
person should understand their his or her history, because which it is essential to make a
better history for the future. The reason is that there are many shamed shameful moments in human’s our history. Therefore, people should deeply
understand their history, and make an effort to
choose better choices for the next generation.
With this understanding, cities should preserve prevent
historical structures that provide citizens opportunities to understand their
city’s history. This is because a structure has a lot of information such as
social norms, ordinary people’s lives, a main function buildings, and
city policies at that time when the structure were are built. (같은 말 및 단어들을 너무 반복적으로 하셨어요.)
In this regard, destroying historical buildings and replacing them with the modern buildings can
lead a city to diminish its historical identity.
Secondly, preventing the destruction of historical
buildings enables a city to grow. Interestingly,
a renowned professor in South Korea published an article in “The Korea
Statistics” which claims that many tourists visit other cities to take a look at that
city’s historical structures. The article claims that historical buildings are
beneficial to the city’s economy, and even influenced the city’s
cultural values. In fact, Rome that is one of a city that has
many historical structures which have attracted
countless tourists. has many tourists that visit for Rome’s various
structures. And many citizens in Rome work in the
tourism industry. This example shows that preventing the
destruction of historical buildings can lead the city’s development.
To sum up, I
believe that a city should prevent preserve
old, historical buildings. The important importance
of my view cannot be underestimated for the reasons that I have
mentioned above. (prevent 와 preserve를 헷갈려 하시는 것
같습니다.)