▶ Your Answer :
There might be some people who believe that
it is worthy to watch movies regarding with real life. I agree with the above idea
for two subsequent reasons: firstly, movie related to real life can give great
lesson. Secondly, it can help people to be a successful leader in the future.
To begin with, people can get advice
through watching the movie, Because As movie describes a lot of experience that
people might go through in their lives. Therefore, it can provide them precious
value such as justice, honesty and bravery. I will give my personal experience
as an example. When I was in primary school. I watch the movie named Forrest
Gump. In the movie, a mentally deficient boy had overcome his weakness through the honesty and diligence.
Not until I watched the movie did I realize importance of diligence. If I had
not watched the movie, I would not be diligent now. The same applies to many
people who like me (이 부분 설명이 더 필요 왜 다른 사람들도 작성자처럼 느낄 수 있는지에 대해 부가적 설명 필요)
On top of that, many leaders can utilize
the words that were used in the movie when they become to deliver speech in
front of many people. This is why referring the attractive words makes people touched in mind. So, the leaders could move
people whenever they want (????). There are many articles which reaffirms my
viewpoint. A few days ago, I read an op-ed piece from the Korea Herald that is
related to the topic. The article described the result of a survey, which was
conducted by Seoul National University social science researchers with more
than 500 people as respondents. they were consisted of two group and only one
group watched movie. Then, they were
asked to persuade many people over one problem. The purpose of the survey was
to understand the consensus view about correlation between movie they watched
and power of convincing. Of the 500-people surveyed, over 80 percent answered
that the group that watched the movie were more attractive since they utilized
reference in the movie. This clearly shows that the more leaders watch movies,
the more chance they become to be successful leader later. (흠...논지가 좀 안맞는 거 같아요 왜 영화를 보면 사람들이 리더가되서 잘 이 끌 수 있는지 잘 모르겠습니다 logic이 안맞는 거 같아요)
As I mentioned above, not only can it give
nice lesson, but it is also helpful for leaders. In conclusion, I strongly
believe that It is not a waste of time for people to watch the movie about real
life. Fair: 17~23 점수: 21 바디 2에 이유들과 예시들이 너무 논지가 안맞는거 같아요. 논지가 안맞기 때문에 전체적 에세이 logic을 방해하는 거 같습니다. 이런것을 방지하기 위해서는 좀 더 명확한 설명들이 더 필요할 꺼 같습니다. 첫 번째 바디에서도 구체적인 설명들이 좀 더 필요할 꺼 같아요! |