▶ Your Answer : In reading passages there is ample support for the author’s claim that it is implausible that there are advanced civilization in the Amazon. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author’s point. First, the professor contends that despite of concentrated jungle, it is possible to form enormous civilization. Archeologist found that organized system road passes through the jungle. It proves that they could have cooperate together to make civilization. This casts doubt on the passage’s claim that by restricting communication with adjacent society, the compact jungle would have disturbed the generation of civilization. Second, the professor insists that artifacts that have been discovered were very elaborate. The ceramic vessels and bowls which excavated in certain area of the Amazon were ornamented beautifully. This counters the passage’s assertion that the artifacts were not sophisticated because the primitive society might not have required elaborated tools. Finally, the professor argues that the Amazon is so vast that the European Expeditions could not have found the evidence of civilization. Also, because it is covered with jungle they experienced difficulty suffer to find the clues. This refutes the passage’s suggestion that the Expeditions could not find the evidence of big civilization excepting to rudimentary settlements.
Good (24–26) 전체적으로 내용 정리 괜찮습니다.
문법/표현 실수 있습니다. -문장 처음에 first, however, second 등등 뒤에 , 붙여주세요 -단/복수 동사 형태 유의해주세요. -마지막 본문에서, covered with 로 해주시는 것이 자연스럽습니다. -또한, experienced 동사이고 suffer도 동사입니다. experienced +명사로 써주세요. 하지만 experienced suffering은 문맥상 내용 보다 좀더 극단적인 표현입니다. difficulty 정도로 표현하시면 무난합니다.
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