These days, all schools make it a rule to
wear school uniforms except for most elementary schools. There are both
advantages and disadvantages of wearing school uniforms mandatorily. These
would be different in middle schools and high schools. Some people think that
high schools should give teenagers the freedom to choose what they wear to
school. However, in my opinion, school uniforms should be compulsory for high
school students because they make them can concentrate in on their study studies and this can
prevent difference between rich students and poor students. (어색한 표현입니다)
First of all, students can concentrate on
their class and work hard. They don’t do not need to focus on their clothes since
their clothes to wear are already fixed. As a result, because students do not need to pay attention in to their fashion they can study in a better environment which is
very quiet and calm (패션에 신경 쓰지 않는다 - 조용한 환경에서 공부할 수 있다 < 서로 크게 연관되어있지 않은 것 같습니다. 따로 설명을 해주세요). For instance, in my case, my friend’s school did not have
their school uniforms but I had to wear school uniforms. At first, many
students didn’t did not want to wear the uniform but our school could managed to get a better
result on the test than my friend’s school since as almost every student could
focused on their class well. After this, students started to feel satisfied with on their
uniforms.
Secondly, wearing uniforms can prevent
difference between rich students and poor students (어색한 표현입니다). If there is no rule about
wearing clothes in school, the difference in their clothes between rich
students' and poor students' clothes will be shown clearly. This would make poor students
themselves feel embarrassed. On the other hand, if they wear same clothes like
school uniforms in their school, there is no way to find out who is rich or
not. It would be better for poor students because they can go to school without
comparing their clothes to other students.
To sum up, wearing uniforms can prevent the
difference between rich students and poor students being shown and also make
students concentrate on their class and work harder. As a result, I strongly
believe that making it a rule of wearing uniforms is much preferable to not
wearing school uniforms.