Some people might think that teachers evaluate evaluation is bettereach other. However, in my opinion, it is better for them the students to be assessed by students for two following reasons.
To begin with, the most important thing to consider in teacher evaluation is the goal of teaching. To be specific, teachers are teaching is a jobs which requires great education and communication educates and communicates with students. That is, the job is for students, so the perception and thinking of students have to be prioritized when it comes to evaluating teachers. (여기 초록색으로 된 문장은 뉘앙스 오류가 있습니다. 잘 이해를 못하겠으니 다시 쓰길 바랍니다.) Furthermore, this evaluation would finally affect on the students again because the result of the assessment could be motivation or driving force for teachers to change their teaching styles or communication patterns with students. As a result, students could be given more help from the evaluation. For example, when I was a high school senior student, my science teacher was negligent in class, so he got the worst assessment in teacher evaluation conducted when the semester was over. As a consequence, he should be was moved to teach the freshman class.
On top of that, other teachers’ evaluation would not be helpful for them because they cannot see each other objectively. Actually, teacher evaluation in schools would be reflected to in their wages, promotions, or class arrangements. Most teachers may want to get more money, be promote early faster, and be placed to easier classes. Thus, it would be natural for them to evaluate themselves benevolently,and in contrast, as compared to assessing their colleagues negatively. In this sense, I experienced a similar situation. I am working as a math teacher in an elementary school. So, I regularly evaluate other teachers in terms of teaching methods. Last semester, my several colleagues gave me the lowest grades in some conditions, so my next promotion became impossible.
To sum up, it is necessary for teachers to be evaluated from their students because the ultimate goal of the teacher’s existence is to help students in various fields, and their opinions would be more objective than that of other teachers. In this regard, I firmly believe that teachers must be evaluated by students.
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