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Some people might think that a job with a higher salary and not much free
time is better than a job with lots of vacations.
However, in my opinion, a job with lots of vacations
is better than a job with a higher salary and not much free time because it can
give positve positive effects and can allow one to make
new friends.
To begin with, a job with lots of free time can provide positve a positive result.
This is because I can spend time what I want to do. This is because it allows one to spend time on
whichever activity he chooses. For example, I have a job with lots of
vacations so I am looking forward to what I am
going to do in vacations. Just doing like that by
doing this, I have become positive and have
gained a passion to do everything. As a result,
I am now working
hard and have a good relationship with my boss. Therefore I do not have
stress at all and having stress, I have a time for relieving it. Therefore, I do not gain that much stress; and even if I do,
I have the time to relieve it.
On top of that, a job with lots of vacations
can lead one to make a lot of new friends
because it broadens people's perspectives. To be
specific, I people can go traveling
during lots of vacations, which as a result
allows people them to better understand
other cultures, life styles lifestyles and
perspectives. As the modern society is becoming increasingly globalized, today's world requires people with international views. People can do
this better by traveling in other countries.
To sum up, a job with lots of vacations can
offer people time to relieve stress and make
more friends.
In this regard, I believe a job with lots of vacations has more advantatges advantages
than a job with a higher salary and not much
free time for the reasons I mentioned above.
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