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Some people claim that universities can enhance the education quality by giving higher salaries to their professors, and I strongly agree with this opinion. This is because by paying more salaries to professors, universities can not only attract more qualified professors, but they also motivate existing professors to do their job harder more hard.
To begin with, universities can improve their quality of education by hiring more talented capable professors, and to hire such professors, the universities have to offer more attractive conditions to entice them. I would like to take an example of the university that I graduated from. GNU(Guru National University) has been the most prestigious university in Korea. However, it wanted to be an world famous university, so it has decided to make plans to hire more talented and qualified professors, especially in basic science departments such as biology and physics. According to the plan, GNU offered higher salaries to attract some Nobel Prize winners and finally it could get them. These Nobel Prize professors soon achieved and showed high performances in their lectures and studies. The plan turned out to be very successful.
One top of that, by giving more salaries, universities can stimulate their existing faculty members to achieve higher performances than before, because money is the most powerful inducement to everyone. In fact, recent polls conducted by GNA showed that increase in annual salary can be a very efficient method to motivate professors to do their lectures and studies harder and better. According to this polls before and after annual salary increase, most of the professors surveyed responded that annual salary rise helped them have stronger sense of responsibility and self-esteem than ever before. This and that this enhanced sense of responsibility and self-esteem made the professors to dedicate themselves to their lectures and studies more.
In this regard, I believe that universities can enhance their overall education quality by paying more money to professors because high salary rate can be very efficient inducement to attract new competent professors and to motivate existing faculties members to do their job better and more hard.
| 채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Score | Fair 18-22 | - Hard 의 비교급인 harder 형태로 나타내주세요. - 문장의 반복사용을 유의하여 주세요. - high salary 가 great motivation된다는 논지가 아주 좋았습니다.
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