▶ Your Answer :In the bible, the phrase “do not lie to
anyone“ is suggested as one of the most important rules for one‘s life. That
would be because the people in the old days thought telling
the truth is a crucial factor for building bonds with anyone. others However, I believe that it is not
the most important consideration for it for two reasons.(해석불가)
To begin with,
speaking unhonestly (이런 단어 없음) does not harm trust between one and
another. Rather, it could become a way to make it bold. For example, if
one intentionally hails a friend whom he or she dislikes even if both are
unacquainted with in the past, the friend could be moved with what the one said
and both can strengthen their relationship. (무슨 뜻..?)This common example shows that stating
insincere opinion to another can be an effective way for maintaining a good
networking.(insincere하면 좋은 네트워킹이 가능한가요? insincere해도 좋은 네트워킹을 할 수 있다 이렇게 말하는게 좋습니다.)
Secondly, considering
the emotion of others, it is sometimes better to lie. For example, in a case
that one could not make it on time due to sleeping late, if he or she speaks tells the reason for being late frankly to a
peer, The friend might be emotionally disappointed with the one and the
relationship between them could be aggravated(원래 나빴는데 더 나빠져야 이 단어를 씁니다). However, if the one gives fake grounds for being late
such as traffic jams, the friend might understand him or her. In other words,
as lying does not harm other people to get emotional wound, it could be a
useful method for keeping a solid partnership.
For the sake of
solidarity and emotion, giving true statements everytime would not be the best
strategy for keeping steadfast bonds with others. This thesis suggests
that what bible the said could sometimes not be a perfect proverb in
daily life. Bible's saying would not be the perfect proverb for
everyday application.
전체적으로 너무 내용이 안 좋습니다
이해조차 되지 않는 문장이 많으며 문법 실수+반복어휘가 많습니다
그리고 bible이 본래 topic이 아닌데 처음과 마지막에서 bible을 강조하면서 off-topic처럼 보입니다
에세이를 많이 다듬어야 할 거 같습니다
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