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Currently, world is changing rapidly and people tend to live with high standard of living. Especially in 21st century, society has changed and human-beings tend to live for the wealth due to the mind-set of mammonism. So, it is true that there is existence of discrimination around the wealth. Hence, people tend to over-spend their money out of their financial budget to show off their wealth. However, human-beings are not able to predict their life such as 'what is going to be happened or when is it going to happened'. Thus, I strongly agree with the statement, "It is always better to save money you earn rather than spend it right away.".
As everyone knows, an emergency is not predictable. Hence, in order to break through those emergencies occurred, savings are one of the most important keys. For example, every business such as ventures (start-ups), conglomerate or any type of business always have has contingency planning and budgeting. This is one of the ways to prevent the bankruptcy. (예시는 더 구체적으로 작성해주세요) In my personal opinion, that applies to everyone in the globe. That is why there is insurance, contingency planning, and budgeting. Moreover, having a fundamental amount of saving will give you stable mental-health as you do not need to have so much worry. (이 부분은 글의 일관성을 해칩니다. 굳이 넣지 않아도 되는 문장입니다.)
Furthermore, tremendous amount of saving gives you a chance to purchase assets such as properties. Properties is are one of the great ways to invest. If the value of buildings or dwellings that you have purchased increases, it will let you earn more money. Having a properties property is extremely advantageous for you as you can earn money by doing nothing. moreover, you can inherit the properties down the generation, then the whole family will be wealthy and have a high standard of living from the start of their life. (근거에 대한 예시가 없습니다.)
In my perspective, my opinion is aligned with the statement, "It is always better to save money you earn rather than spend it right away.". It is not a bad thing to spend the money you earn right away as you can think of it as a reward. However, spending money without plannings and saving is like putting yourself in a strained and tensed situation. |