*진하게 표시한 부분은 제가 파악한 문단의 주요 내용이니 참고하세요^^
Both the reading passage and the lecture deal with nuclear energy. According to the reading passage, there are some serious potential problems that can be caused by nuclear plants. However, the points made in the article are totally contradicted by the lecturer’s claim that it is nuclear energy that is the most realistic energy source on in the world.
To begin with, the article says that nuclear energy can create health concerns because of the radioactive material and overheat. On the contrary, the lecturer casts doubt on this point by asserting that it is nonsense that nuclear plants can induce health problems. This is because power ban reactors can automatically slow down the speed of motor so that the temperature won’t rise at the point of concerning. overheat에 대한 반박은 제시되어 있지만 radioactive에 대한 반박이 정리되어 있지 않습니다. 지문을 검토해보시고 detail을 보완해주세요.
On top of that, the reading argues that it is too expensive in order to erect unclear nuclear plants. This perspective is also challenged by the lecturer’s claim that although it is costly to build those plants however, the fuel of plants, uranium, is much cheaper than oil and gas. although절 이후에는 but, however 등의 역접관계의 접속사를 사용하지 않습니다. In addition, the speaker indicates that the overall cost of a nuclear plant is just the initial cost of building. 비용과 관련해 대립되는 주장이 잘 정리되어 있습니다.
The last point made in the reading is that there are some other sources, such as wind energy which are both cheaper and better than nuclear energy. The lecturer, however, contradicts this his point by asserting that wind power differs time to time, so it is less reliable than nuclear energy. He suggests that nuclear energy can produce the ceaseless amount of power, so it is more reasonable to harness nuclear energy.
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전반적으로 내용 정리에 필요한 부분을 잘 노트테이킹해주신 것 같습니다. 각 문단의 point에 초점을 두고 대립되는 내용들도 잘 정리된 편입니다. 불필요한 미사여구 사용을 최소화해서 간결한 느낌을 더 살려주고, 오탈자나 문법오류를 점검할 시간여유를 남겨두면서 연습하시면 좋을 것 같아요. 제가 정확하게 지문의 내용을 모르는 상태에서 요약 형식이나 detail들만을 가지고 평가한 부분이므로 꼭! 문제지의 답안과 직접 확인하셔서 노트테이킹에서 빠진 부분이나 잘못 이해된 부분은 없는지 내용 체크해주시기 바랍니다. 수고 많으셨습니다^^화이팅!