Some people want to watch performance such as a play, a concert or a sporting event on television. Because they can just watch it. (not clear give more details) However, I prefer to attend a live performance than to watch it on a television. There are two reasons why I feel this way. One reason for my argument is that I feel more energetic, when I am in the spot. The other reason is that I can catch all the action. of the performer or stage.
First of all, attending a live performance is much more dynamic than viewing it on a television. If I attend a live performance, I can interact with the performer and also I can share my emotion with other people who are enjoying the same performance, which makes me more dynamic and fun. In my case, I love the baseball. So I sometime go to the baseball stadium and cheer my team with the fans of my team. If my team player hits the ball, all the fans shout and really enjoy the game together. It is more exciting and I feel energetic.
Second, people cannot catch all the actions of an event when they are viewing it on a/the television. Even in a live broadcast, there can be some delay and people can only see what the program director wants them to see. For example, I went to a concert of a singer for the last winter. Television primarily shows just the regulation broadcast, but, while at the concert, I could hear my favorite songs and also I can could enjoy the talk show and anchor stage which is were not showed on the television. Thus, attending a live performance allows us to see more aspects of the show.
In conclusion, I would always choose to see a live performance in person. Attending a live performance is much better, in that it allows us to really experience the event. The television can never allow the viewers to fully appreciate the atmosphere of a live event, nor can’t capture all the action that is happening.
Review verb conjugation. Verbs in a sentence need to be in same tense and add articles front of the noun. Most of the sentences were good but there were few sentences with lack of details and make the reader confused. I agree with your point that performances should be watched in live.