▶ Your Answer : As the world continues to undergo economic recess, the number of people who want to make a lot of money easily and fast by luck. They argue that there is nothing much better than success with their luck because they do not have to go through difficult hardships. However, I strongly believe that people can have a more successful life not by their chances but by their hardwork since success based on hard work lasts for a long time and is much more satisfying.
First of all, if people work hard to achieve their dreams and goals, they are more likely to be successful for life. This is because while people do their best at their work and in their study, they not only gain great rewards but also valuable assets such as diligence and time management skilles which would help them persistently. On the contrary, the successful result obtained from just luck is temporary. For instance, when I took a math test at middle school, I got good grades even though I guessed many answers because I was not prepared much. It was just a luck but it made me lazy studying, which led to poor grades on the next step. I realized that I should not depend on my luck and therefore, I stuied very hard by planning ahead and practicing a lot of mock exams. In doing so, I learned study skills and hard working spirit as well as gained much better grades on exams.
Second, if people succeed due to their efforts, they are more likely to treasure their success. That is, people who performed their best are happy and satisfied with what they earned while those who readily got what they want without any hard work do not value about it since they did not earn it by doing on their own. According to a recent study, most of the lottery winners are having a miserable life, even worse than before they did not win the lottery. They are having family ploblems, huge debt and mental diseases. This is due to the fact that they became bored with ordinary things and tend to look for only better luck, not thinking about working hard. As a result, they lose true happiness with their lives and their seemingly success was disappeared fast as it came fast.
시간 부족으로 결론을 못 썻습니다...ㅠㅠ |