▶ Your Answer : Some people might think that recommendation from friends or information from magazines has more impacts on deciding to purchase something Important. However, I believe that we make a major purchase mostly based on reviews from online communities. This is because people today consider online reviews more objective feedbacks and because we usually purchase something online.Firstly, people tend to think online reviews are less subjective and biased (이렇게 쓰기 보다 more reliable이런식으로 긍정적인 언어로 자신의 의견을 강화해주시는 것이 좋습니다!). To be specific, as online reviews are usually made by anonymous users, we tend to think that we can obtain more candid feedbacks online. On the other hand, other types of reviews other than online reviews are likely to have a bias. For example, I observed that people complained about magazines showed only positive reviews about some products since it got a fee for advertising the products on magazines from the producer of them. When it comes to reviews from friends, the number of friends people can get information was so limited that it was hard to generalize the feedbacks.(어떤 부분이 generalize하기 어려운지 더 제시해주세요! 의견이 극단적이라든가..) Thus, I think people tend to make a major choice based on the information from online communities. Second, more and more people purchase something online these days. (이것 만으로는 근거가 될 수 없지요 많은 사람들이 구매하니까 -> 그 다음의 이유가 필요합니다) The online platform seems most popular to be used to shop since it’s it is (시험에서는 줄여쓰시면 안 됩니당!) convenient for customers to compare the price and quality of products. This means that when we purchase something, we are naturally going to see online reviews during the process of a purchase even if we already got information from other sources. In my case, when I intended to buy my new i-pad iPad, I already knew that a particular model was great since I heard from my friends, but finally decided to buy the model just after seeing the positive reviews online. Considering this instance, online review influences on choices of purchases most because people are supposed to see online review when finally making a purchase. (차라리 이 부분을 정리해서 메인포인트로 만드는 것이 깔끔하겠지요) In summary, I admit that sometimes we consider information from friends or magazines in order to decide to make a major purchase. Nevertheless, online reviews is are the most significant factor to make us choose to buy something.
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