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연어님, 안녕하세요! 오랜만에 뵈어요... An intriguing topic of discussion at hand is whether it is important to know events happening around the world, even if they are unlikely to affect my daily life. The answer to this question can vary greatly, depending on the individual perspectives. Thus, the jury may still be out, but as far as I am concerned I agree with the statement. In this essay, I will present two reasons supporting my standpoint as follows. To begin with, knowing event about happening around the world allows poor people in the world who are in troubled about waterless problems to help them practical assistance. This is because, there are so many people in the world who are really need water just for surviving their own lives. However, in other world side, tremendous people waste precious water routinely, such as washing hands by using too much water, and closing faucet carelessly. So, If these wasting people realized about water problem seriously, they will be able to stop wasting behavior and they even spend their money to rescue pitiful people who suffered from water shortages. Consequently, this will bring about practical help for waterless people. In this sense, there is no doubt that recognizing the world event is the most important worth, even though they are not unlikely impact my daily life in terms of saving many people’s lives reality. Once again, attending world event is very valuable humanity. On top of that, comprehending world event is the best way to prepare the World War for people who are at war. This is due to the fact that most of people live in busy daily life, so they don’t have time to pay other concerns carefully even world event especially the World War. On the other hand, there are so many World War had occurred and some of the war are occurs these days in some countries. For example, my country has divided into two countries, so it is difficult to say that my country is certainly safe now. We sometimes heard uncomfortable news of North Korea through news articles or conformed information on the Internet. Unless we don't know event happening around the world event particularly neared North Korea, we don’t have to take appropriate action instantly. So, even if these news which happening around the world are unlikely to impact my daily life personality, but it is very significant things by all manner of means over the long run. In conclusion, I strongly agree with the statement that it is important to know events happening around the world, even if they are unlikely to affect your daily life for the reasons I mentioned above. Once again, although the verdict may still be out, I personally believe that two of my rationales above are sufficiently convincing enough to represent the viewpoints of a majority of people who are in favor of my claim. 이번엔 본론부분 모델에세이 없이 스스로 한번 써봤어요..ㅠㅠ 그리고, 예시가 꼭 들어가야 하나요? 일화같은 거나 연구조사 내용.. 쓰다보니 그런걸 못썼는데.. 그냥 써도 되는 건지 궁금해용!!! ㅠㅠㅠ
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