▶ Your Answer :
Students can
study more effectively if they do project in a group.
Today, societies have various types of tasks
because of diversity. Since people cannot solve all problems that exist in
societies, they need others to help them. The fact that societies have changed quickly
and are divided into a variety of fields allows them to share information with
others and help each other with their needs. The more diverse societies become,
the more help they need from others. This phenomenon also adapt to school,
where many students spend much time with others. Therefore, if student studied
more effectively, they should interact with other students, sharing information
that is useful for them.
First, not only can students save time on searching
for educational materials but also share information with others, which enables
them to broaden sights. If students wanted to get in-depth knowledge, they
should get a lot of information from various magazines or books, even on
websites. They will take a lot of time to search for this information. If they
study in a group, they can spend less time on searching for it because of
others’ help. They will share information that they find from various types of
educational materials. For example, when they read a lot of books and then
write the essay of them, students who participate in a group will complete
their tasks by sharing information with others. In addition, since they have
chance to listen to others’ opinions in a group, they can broaden sights and
respect diversity.
Secondly, students who participate in a
group have to complete their tasks that are provided from a group, so they will
develop responsibility and social skills due to time that they spend with group
members. If a student did not perform his tasks, all students in a group will
get a bed result because the group cannot complete their project. For this
reason, they will spend time doing project, so they can improve their
responsibility. Besides, they have to spend time doing tasks with group
members, so they will become social animals.
In conclusion, as I just mentioned above,
it is better for students to study in a group than alone.
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