There have been varying opinions whether a teacher who is serious and strict is more effective a teacher who uses humor and easygoing. Some people argue that teaching through funny joke and friendly is effective. However, I have a different idea. I believe that rigid and rigorous is most effectively method to teaching. This is because the more strict teachers do, the more students will follow well.
To begin with, It is effective for students to participate in class intensively and improve score. There is a great example supporting this idea. I have a teacher who try more rigid for students. As a result, students improve attitude and test score. This teacher’s acting leads to many profits. This profits have positive effects not just on one self, but also on many other matters such as intensive classes and improve students test score. For this reason, Severe teacher needs for student.
On top of that, If teacher is not rigorous, School would not be able to found regulations. Putting it differently, rigorous is most important things in a group life. A recent survey from Statistics Commission in United Nations revealed an interesting result : 94 percent of those surveyed, teacher and parent, think that rigid and strict is need for student. The remaining 11 percent of the researchers show also not opposed theme but neutral in the near-positive. This outcome is because teacher who uses humor brings detrimental influences include disorder in class and discord with students. Through survey’s result and that of effects, we can know that teacher acting more stricter is rational behavior.
To conclude integrating the positive and negative aspects mentioned above, I strongly believe that teacher who is rigid and severe is more effective than a teacher who uses humor and is easygoing.
연습때마다 시간이 5분정도 초과합니다.. 어느부분을 줄여야 할지 조언 부탁드립니다..
이번이 두번째 써보는 것이라서 정말 많이 부족합니다.
게다가 위의 에세이는 시험과 동일하게 시간을 재고 쓴 후에 올린것이라서
개인적인 검토도 거치지 않아 더욱 더 부족할 것 같네요..그래도 많은 격려 부탁드립니다 ㅠㅠ |