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Some people think that the advantages of classmates far outweigh those of parents on a child's successful grade in school. However, In my opinion, parents are more beneficial than classmates in order to succeed their child in school for two reasons: to have a practical assistance and to have a valuable life lessons.
To begin with, parents allows young child to have a practical assistance. This is because, parents already have accumulated their own know-how in their school. Thus, they have many resources and skills with which to teach and guide younger child. In the sense, children are capable of learning from their parents how to improve their grade effectively in school. For example, I learned much more from my senior employees than from my peers when I first started working at a motor company. Because my peers did not have much work experience and we were not able to learn much from each others. On the other hand, the senior employees taught me many important work skills, such as how to create effective presentations and how to safely handle the machinery in the lab. They helped me greatly, and thanks to them, I was acclimate easily to the workplace. I think this example is same as that academic successful for a child in school.
On top of that, parents teaches young person valuable life lessons to enhance the school record. This is due to the fact that, young teenagers can learn valuable lessons from parents who have more mature and tend to have a more comprehensive understanding of school life. In this respect, parents' understanding can affect youngster’s school life in positive ways. Moreover, healthy school life can make a positive impact on their academic success in school. For instance, after failing multiple times to pass the exam to become an English teacher, my sister became extremely discouraged. Most of her friend advised her to pursue a different career, she got soon stressed about her professional future. Meanwhile, my parents advised her to continue to study and try to pass the examination again. In fact, she always does all her studies in a conscientious manner, and healthy school life. To encourage her, to stick with her goal, they told her stories of how they overcame failures in their own lives. Because of their advice, she rose to the challenge, and pass her exam, and finally became a teacher last year. Likewise, these example shows that it is more important to parents’ influence than their peers to academic succeed in school.
To sum up, children are more beneficial from following their parents than class’ friends to educational success in school. This is because sharing time not with classmates but with parents positively affect practical assistance from parents as well as the worth of life lessons. In this regard, I strongly disagree with the statement that classmates have more influence than parents on a child’s academic success in school for the reasons I mentioned above. |