■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer : | The lecturer argues that the supposed advantages of wave farms are just an illusion. This contradicts the reading passage’s claim that wave-energy facilities will be widely used because of their many benefits. (문장부호)
First, the lecturer insists that the wave-energy facilities are not that dependable. The lecturer says that there are possibilities that the wave-energy farms have technical problems that make fluctuation in generating wave-energy. This casts doubts on the reading passage’s claim that the accurate prediction of the generation capacity is one of the strengths that will make wave-energy common in the future. Second, the lecturer claims that the wave-energy might have an adverse effect in terms of the environment. The lecturer mentions that the detrimental chemicals of wave-energy might pollute the ocean. This counters the reading passage's suggestions that wave-energy does not include any elements that are harmful to the environment. Third, the lecturer insists that wave-energy might have a negative influence on the natural beauty of landscapes surrounding wave-energy farms. The reason is that the wave-energy facility has bright colors that are easily detectable to people. This refutes the reading passage’s claim that the wave-energy facilities will not be conspicuous so that protect the beauty of surrounding landscapes.
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