▶ Your Answer :
A large number of people might argue that people don’t have to accept criticism from others to get a success in a group. Contrary to popular belief, I think that people should rise their skill from other members’ advice to achieve the group goal for following reasons : the group is composed of various people and people can broaden their perspective.
First of all, the majority of group has different types of people. It is obvious that there are lots of different idea which people can not consider without others. Also, idea is based on someone’s personal experiences and knowledge. Hence ,the appropriate idea that people can not consider can lead the success of team. For example, my major is the french language and literature but my secondary major is a business. When I do a team project during business class, I realized that there are various students that study different major. Business is an academic that need widen perspective. So diverse students can results the best answers to the team projects. By collecting the various advice from each other’s knowledge can lead the adequate way.
In addition, people can enhance their skills and complement their abilities by other members. It is commonly observed that, every people has their own strength on particular field. For instance, people who are good at drawing pictures can be lack of manipulating computer. In reverse, someone who is in the same group has a high quality skill of using computer program. Then they can give advice and criticism to each other part of lack and finally it can be a big synergy to reach a success.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that people are better to take advice from other group members to get the best results for the reasons I mentioned above. All in all, by accepting the criticism from others can be a best synergy and broaden someone’s perspective to a useful way. |