■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :라이팅 정규교재 p112 the Everglades in Florida 문제입니다. 감사합니다. |
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▶ Your Answer :
The lecturer’s point of view is opposed to
the passage’s claim that the Everglades in Florida will be everlastingly
destroyed because of environmental problems. The lecturer (사람이기 때문에 lecture이 아닌 lecturer가 옵니다) thinks that there is
still hope as it can be restored.
First of all, according to the lecturer, the
level of water pollution is decreasing due to the regulation of using chemical
fertilizer enforced by the US government. The farmers are forced to use
fertilizers that contain less hazardous chemicals, and this will significantly contribute
to lowering the level of water pollution. This is effective and will eventually
lead to the amelioration of the water quality.
Next, the lecturer claims that the lost
soil is being restored. It will take some time to go back to its original
level, but it will be restored at last. This contradicts the passage’s negative
viewpoint on the loss of soil. (어떻게 negative한지 서술해주세요)
Finally, the lecturer points out that the
US government purchased the extensive property in the Everglades. It is mostly
sugar farmland for now, but the government plans to restore them to wild marshland
in the near future. This will give back the habitat to the Florida panther
which is in danger of extinction. This gives a hopeful possibility opposed to
the passage’s pessimistic point of view.
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. 디테일이 굉장히 부족한 편입니다.
주어진 자료에서 최대한 많은 evidence를 뽑아서 상세하게 서술해주세요!
(인트로와 길이가 엇비슷합니다.)
리딩과 리스닝 내용을 알 수 없어서 정확히 어떤 포인트를 말하면 좋다고 제시는 못해드리지만
본문에 나오는 증거는 다 쓰신다고 생각하시면 될 것 같습니다.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*