▶ Your Answer :
I agree with the opinion that movies tell a
lot about a country. First, movie records time through a video. It eventually
contains the circumstances and atmosphere of the country. For example, if the
movie is about two characters’ love stories in the 90s in Korea, the spectators
could indirectly experience Korea’s 90s through the character’s clothes, where
the character lives and even the language characteristics.
Secondly, as the movie director’s
nationality is usually the same as the movie characters, movies reflect the
culture and characteristics of the nation. We say a phrase like “Writing
reflects the thoughts of the writer.”. Shooting movies are not different from
writing because both are creative activities. As a result, movies necessarily
contain the director’s thoughts which are from the nation’s culture and
characteristics. For example, there is a Korean movie which has been a hot
issue these days. The name is “Ki saeng chung”, and this movie won a prize in
the Kan movie festival. It was because this movie well contained the gap
between the poor and the rich in Korea society.
Lastly, we can find obvious evidence in
each country’s movies. Movies have differences between countries. For example,
India’s movie industry which is called Bollywood is different from any other
country. India’s movies are like musical. It has many songs and dances in the
movie. However, does the Hollywood movie contains dance and song performances
like India’s do? The answer is “No”.
우선 아쉬운 점은 introduction과 conclusion이 정확하게 나누어지지 않았다는 점입니다. 들어가는 부분과 마무리 짓는 부분이 중요한 만큼 summary와 hook에 중점을 두어서 작성해주세요 주장 자체는 아주 clear하고, 전하고자 하는 바도 좋고, supporting detail도 깔끔합니다. 다만 첫번째 paragraph같은 경우 조금 더 detail있덨다면 좋았을 거 같습니다
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