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There is a famous Korean saying that, “People
lived long ago were peaceful.” This is the saying my friends used to tell me
when they wanted to emphasize the fact that there was no stress as nowadays.
However, I do not agree with that saying. Therefore, I disagree with the
following statement that today, life is easier and cozier than it was when our
grandparents were young for the following reasons: financial hard and sickness
To begin with, people lived when our
grandparents were young mostly were not rich unless they were at related
position from government or high position in emerging industry. For example, I
used to hear when my grandmother enjoy talking she was a child. I was surprised
how life of me currently and her when she was about my age could be so that
different. She said she did not have a cozy robust home like we do. When it
rained, rain drops used to fill out entirely. She had to awake removing all
water. Also, unlike as we use transportation easily such as buses or taxies,
she could not use those too. She lived in country side so there was not much
ways to use means of transportation. Compared to that, we live in much comfort
since almost everyone got their cozy and healthy homes. Also, I came to think
riding my parents’ car every day I go to school. Therefore, we cannot say it
has always been cozy and easier for them to live.
Furthermore, there was many disease growing
there and infections between people. In Korea when my grandparents were young,
there had been wars out broke from Japan or North Korea. For citizens, they
were so poor to have nothing to eat and wear. To illustrate, when my
grandfather was young, he was so hungry that ate everything came to his eyes.
With that eating habit, he used to infect easily from the food. However, since
he lived in country side, it was not always easy to get there instantly even it
was so dangerous. Also, unlike today, there was not much vaccinations invented.
However, we nowadays have enough food to it. If there is not people who can,
government support and protect for those so there is not much to worrying
about. Also, when new diseases are forming, scientists invent new vaccines
instantly and provide them for free. Thus, unlike our grandparent’s generation,
we can be easily protected from sickness.
In conclusion, financial hardness and
sickness are the reasons why I disagree with the following statement.. 콩클루젼
귀찮아서 생략 했어요 ㅎㅎㅎ.. 바디 위주로 첨삭 부탁 드립니다.. ㅠㅠ
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