Some people say that students are
influenced more by their teachers than their friends. However I think that
students are influenced more by their friends for several reasons: friends
share more things in common and friends feel
(they are) more comfortable than the teachers.
To begin with, students share more
things in common with their friends unlike
(than) with their teachers. Students go to
school every day and they spend most of their time there with friends. They are
all in same situation, having similar problems and thoughts, and therefore it
is easy for them to share their opinions with friends. By sharing common things
with friends, students tend to believe and
(refrain from repetitive words / believe in = trust)
trust each other, depending on one another
(same here). This makes students be influenced
by their friends more. On the other hand, although teachers spend time with
their students as well, teachers have to care for every single students in class, resulting in lack of attention to focus on individuals. This affects how the
students feel about their teachers and in the end(,
they have) less trust for them, (and are)
less influenced (by the teachers). To be
specific, there are a lot of cases that students (who)
listen to their friends' opinion at once while (they)
refuse to listen to their parents' opinion thinking that they are just nagging.
This shows the reason why (that) students are influenced more by their friends
than by their teachers. (You don’t need this last
sentence)
In addition, students feel more
comfortable when they are with their friends rather than (with) their teachers. Students and teachers are different
in many ways no matter how hard the teachers try to be friendly with students.
Teachers' job is to lead the students in a right way and also to give knowledge to students (teach them). In this way, there tend(s) to be a gap between teachers and friends. Making friends feel easy to discuss problems or matters
that one has and resulting that they listen to each other well and be
influenced. (I can’t understand this
sentence) To be specific, all friends of mine and including myself, we (I)
find each other for advice when we are in trouble. This shows that we influence
one another more than the teachers do.
In conclusion, as students are likely
to share many things in common and comfortable with their friends, students are
influenced more by their friends than by their teachers.