▶ Your Answer : As time goes by, people’s
mentality on qualities of a good son or daughter has been changed in my
culture.
In the past, children
who are quite, modest and completely obeyed to their parents were considered as
good sons or daughters. If children had different opinions to their parents’,
as a good son and daughter, they were supposed to hide their own opinion and do
what their parents want them to do. For instance, in my mother’s generation and
grandmother’s generation, people tended to choose their job which their parents
wanted them to choose. They believed that it was a way to pleasure their
parents. Also, when children chose jobs that parents had wanted, parents would felt
happy and thought that their children were very loyal. For example, my uncle,
who was very talented at singing, had wanted to be a singer but forgo his dream
job because his mother hoped his son to be a doctor.
However, people’s way
of think has changed a lot and keeps changing. Today, parents no longer want
their children just to follow parents’ opinion and rely on them. Rather they
want their children to be independent and be strong to pursue what they really
want to do. Even if children’s opinion about their future is quite different
from parents’ hope, most young parents no longer force their children into
following parents’ opinion. Rather, when children are determined and try their
best to accomplish their own goal, most parents proud of them and support their
children. Moreover, today children are expected to be confident and do not hide
their opinion. Rather parents want their children to say their own opinion
confidently.
연어님, 지난번 첨삭 감사합니다. ^^ 이번문제에서는 body를 2개로 줄이고 대신 body 2개를 좀 길고 충실하게 쓰려고 했습니다. 그러다보니 첫번째 단락은 그냥 질문만 정리해서 한줄로 쓰게됬구요. 마지막 summary도 안들어갔어요. 고득점 받으려면 최소 300자 넘어야 한다는데... 저는 277 밖에 안되네요... ㅠㅠ |