■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic :People are incapable of being satisfied with what they have; they always want what they don't have. | |
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▶ Your Answer : Some people think that people always pursue what they do not have
and are not satisfied with their possessions. However, in my opinion, many
people try to eliminate their eager to possess something from their mind. This
is because they try to thank for their possessions and think the amount of them
is too excessive for their positions.
To begin with, some people try to be thankful for
what they currently have. Since they see many poor people through in person or
media, they sense that it is their happiness to have and enjoy their
possessions. For my experience, I participated in the program and felt how it
would be if I do not have enough resources. I had to drink only few drops of water and eat nothing for 24 hours
to finish the program. Before I went to the camp, I thought I could easily endure the hunger. However, after finishing the
program, I thanked for the fact that I could eat three meals in a day and drink enough water.
On top of that, some people think their
possessions are too big for their standings. As thinking of their experiences
of hunger or indirectly experience the poor life, they question if only they
can freely enjoy their life with enough possessions. Because of this, they
donate money or foods to poor people with the passion to distribute their
things equally all together. For example, one entertainer has donated millions
of dollars. However, he are not too rich and has to live in a rented house.
According to the interview, he said that after visiting poor countries in
Africa, he felt too sorry for enjoying luxury life and decided to donate his
money.
To sum up, some people are satisfied with what
they have and regard it excessive for them. In this regard, I think the given
statement has errors and should not be applied to all people.
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매번 저의 에세이를 첨삭해 주시는 분들께 감사드립니다.^^ 특히 훈제연어님께 많은 도움 받았는데 이번에도 첨삭해 주시면 정말 감사드리겠습니다.