▶ Your Answer :
In the reading passage, there is an ample
support for the author's claim that the research made us understand that how,
when and where dogs became domesticated. However, the professor in the lecture
gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point.
First, the professor contends that wolves
were hard to train because they were so aggressive to human so the people had
trained the wolves by using terrible predators. (이에 대한 listening설명이 조금 더 있다면 훨씬 더 에세이가 elaborate할 것 같습니다) This casts doubt on the reading
passage's claim that wolvess were trained by humans as hunting companions..
Next, the professor insists that the
footprints of a dog and a young boy were founded (find와 found의 어휘 차이 자세하게 공부해주세요) on 26000 years ago. This
counters on the reading passage's assertion that dogs were domesticated approximately
in 16000 years go.
Finally, the professor argues that that dogs were founded in various countries such as Europe, North America
and middle east. This refutes the reading passage's suggestion that dogs were
domesticated in China first and then spread to another countries.
우선 professor from listening/reading passage라는 설명이 붙어있으면 훨씬 더 자세하게 설명이 가능할 것 같습니다. 문법 오류가 굉장히 많은 편입니다. 우선 에세이 연습보다는 문장 쓰기 연습을 조금 더 하시고 나서 paragraph, essay이렇게 옮겨가시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. 또한 내용이 조금 적은 듯 합니다. listening조금 더 자세하게 듣고 써주도록 해주세요
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