Most of the people in modern society travels(travel) to other countries either to experience new ambience of the world or to relieve stress from their tremendous amount of work. Travelling, however, requires quite a lot of money, including the airplane tickets, accommodations(accommodations), and foods. I personally believe that saving money for the future has more advantages facets (advantageous facets- advantageous 형용사로 썼어요) than spending money on travelling. Saving money not only saves you from emergency situations, but also to buy cars or houses that needs huge amount of money to invest. (not only, but also 구문에서 앞뒤병렬이 아닐까요 – saves you from emergency situations, but also buys cars or houses ~)My views can be greatly substantiated by the reasons addressed below.
First of all, saving money can help you to escape from any emergency situations that you encounter. There is going to be an emergency circumstances (an emergency circumstance) at least once in a life time. From my personal experience, I once travelled to
Not only that, it prevents you to worry about buying stuff that requires huge amount of money in the later of life. (Not only because of the first reason, taking a travel prevents you to worry about buying stuff that requires huge amount of money in the later of life.) People must buy houses and cars when they get older. Those (These) became (become) the necessities in today's world. (It is necessary to buy these in today’s world.) One cannot live properly without those (No one can live without these in proper). For example, a lot of people loan money from bank to buy houses, because they haven't saved their money when they were young (since they were young). I am not saying that loaning money from bank is bad, but some of the people are loaning quite a lot of money to buy it even at the level where they cannot pay back. (I am not saying that loaning money from bank is bad, but loaning quite a lot of money to buy houses is not good, because some of the people are not at the level of paying back the money.)
To sum up the points, I believe that saving money for the future has more advantages (advantageous) aspects, such as preparing for any emergencies, than spending money on travelling to other countries. Although travelling might provide you some experiences, I believe that there is no point of experiencing the new world, if you cannot plan for your future properly. As a non-risk taker, I would rather buy houses without loans than going (go) on a trip.
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