The reading passage argues that cosmetic surgery allows people to have strong confidence and to accomplish more than before. However, the lecturer contradicts the reading passage’s arguments with several opposing views.
To begin with, while the reading passage maintains that cosmetic surgery stimulates self-image and a remarkable change in people’s mind, which can be is achieved through an external change, the lecturer actually points out that it is not true that cosmetic surgery has a positive effect on people because a social bias and a healthy health problem can be caused by cosmetic surgery. Therefore, it is hard for people to solve the problems related to them side effects of cosmetic surgery.
On top of that, the lecturer denies the reading passage which argues that cosmetic surgery makes it possible for people to get a fair opportunity and to make more money than ordinary counterparts. The main reason why the lecturer opposes to the reading passage is that there exists a severe discrimination and a taboo in our society regarding people who have experienced cosmetic surgery.
Finally, the lecturer casts doubt on the reading passage which maintains that cosmetic surgery can improve people’s needs to live a healthier life style. The lecturer argues that cosmetic surgery is not perfect and popular opinion has not accepted cosmetic surgery yet. Also, unhealthy results can be caused by cosmetic surgery. The lecturer takes a steroid as an example, which makes people unhealthy
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