Nowadays many people have a lot of experience visiting other nations. It is very valuable opportunity to learn different cultures. So, when people plan to move to abroad, friends sometimes advise them to accept other country's culture because they think just following is polite and safe. However, I am against that statement. I suppose that it is pretty better living in a way you did at home country than following other's custom. That is because it would create a fresh unique custom, moreover, It is meaningful that people preserve their own cultural character.
To start with, the coexistence of a variety of cultures creates unique atmosphere. It is beneficial to the country. People already know that a cultural diversity is valuable. People from all over the world would make society more harmonious. Furthermore, It has a positive effect on widening point of view. For instance, there are Seo-rae maul in Korea. Which is small France located in Seoul. Many of franch are living at Soe- Rae maul with Korean. When I visited Seo-rae maul, I was really impressed by the distinct atmosphere. Signboards written in french and Korean, pretty blue-eyed little girls and boys... It is extraordinary landscape seen only in Seo-rae maul.
On top of that, At aspect of immigrants, persisting their custom is very important. No matter where they live, It is not changed who they are. Preserving own culture keep their originality. Moreover It remind their home and father continually. Let's take my experience, My sister who is computer engineer is now at Lodon. She went to England to find job several years ago. As a result, she established herself as a promising engineer. After than, she married his husband, she end up deciding to live in Lodon. Though she is now English, her dinnertime menu is still Korean way. Last new year, she prepared a 떡국 for her husband. Which is her favorite korean traditional food.
To sum up, preserving own culture is advantageous to both of the country and immgrants.
It would create the exclusive multicultural charateristic by harmonization .What's more, It is good to keep their custom to immgrants. On the whole, now there is no more boudary in the world. It is wrong to reject the particular culture of stranger or to admire the culture of majority.
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