To be honest, it is quite demaning demanding for a poor student like me to spend 20 dollars a month to subscribe to a daily newspaper. However, a true reason behind this is that newspaper is the best source that I can get pretty good quality of information. Not only does It offer a reliable current issue, but also it gives (누구에게+무엇을이 빠졌습니다) 예를들어 it gives me quality information~ to improve my critical perspective by comparing a various news sources. comparing A with/to/and B.
첫번째 문장은 불필요한 내용으로 보입니다. 웬만하면 전체적인 주제문장을 사용하시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. :)
this가 가리키는것이 "나같은 학생은 20달러짜리 일일신문을 구독하는 것이 부담이 된다"는 사실인데,
"그 이유는 신문이 양질의 정보를 얻을 수 있는 최고의 자료가 되기 때문이다" 라고 설명을 하신것은 앞뒤가 맞지 않아요. :)
First of all, information from various news is quite reliable and intellectual.(news ~ is intellectual = 뉴스가 지능적이다라는 표현이 됩니다. 수정 -> …reliable and helps one become more intellectual. ) In such world with overflowing information, knowing a lot is not an ideal goal. What is truly important is what kind of knowledge he or she has. Learning harsh criticism or awkward knowledge does not contribute to stay well-informated. informed. It just infuses wrong information contaminating a person's pure mind. I was almost convinced by an absurd arguement by some news strikingly defaming my nation's great former president.
Moreover, there is a more important thing something more important than just good information itself: various news sources. I can not educate myself to be a constructive or creative critic or viewer, but it is possible with the help of various news sources. It is foolish enough to think that all news sources have the same perspective. Every news source has its own viewpoint and it is quite interesting to see how diverse its idea is. By comparing such perspective, I can truly be an open-minded person with broad insight. Even though US's new dispatch of troops to Afghanistan seems to only entail malign influence, I found an actual purpose behind its ostensible appearance by reading a various forms of news focusing on the same issue. 부정적인 영향의 표면 뒤에 숨겨져있는 목적이 무엇인가요? 혹시 긍정을 말씀하시려 하신 것은 아닌지 :)
첫번째 Every~ insight 까지가 주제같은데 찾기가 매우 힘들어요. 웬만하면 문단의 주제는 첫문장으로 해주시는 것이 좋아요 :)
To sum up, to stay staying well-informated informed is pretty easy: just order a daily newspaper. One would be educated with a great quality and widen his own perspective by taking different approach to the same current issue. If one misses a the day's newspaper, one would lose a the day's important issue what that others know.
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