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Recently, general awareness about whether money is the only purpose to work or not has aroused as heated arguments. People, nevertheless, have conflicting ideas: some people say that there are other important reasons to work, while others deem otherwise. From my own point of view, I am in agreement with the former stand. There are several bases for why I assert like this and I want to delve into some of the most significant ones here. One of the most crucial bases for this is that people usually feel a sense of accomplishment while they work hard although the task is very difficult. As a society has been developed, people have spent their times on working. So working has been significant factor in our lives. We could feel happy and satisfied when We overcome many difficult tasks with co-workers and would be evaluated valuable person in the company. If we don't work because there is enough money to spend, we couldn't feel like these achievement. This would result in many mental problems. It is possible for us to experience depression, unability to feel self-esteem. There is a reliable research that supports my opinion. According to the World Working Association, most people feel alive when they work at their company. Moreover, they actually feel to return to work when they have long term vacation because they would become lethargic. One more rational motive why I am same mind with aforementioned is that working is not the only for individual, but also society and economy of one's country. The people who are in opposition to my stance have an inclination to mistakenly overlook the importance of working force. However, once they come to realize that society would go well with many related work force, they will not be able to help but agree my stance. People who are in the society should work feeling sense of duty to their country. Without their work, both county and society would progressively collapse more and more. This can be explained comprehensively by taking an examples of country. Because of well developed well fare system, many people in their country don't work and are paid money. In this situation, the country aksed EU financial aid. Looking at all the statements above, there are many bases to be considered. There certainly are benefits of money to be reasons for working. However money is the only reason for people to work. Therefore I acclaim that we should work since we can feel self-satisfaction and make our society more developed. 독립형만큼은15점맞았으면좋겠습니다ㅜㅜ 몇점정도까지희망이있는지살펴봐주셨으면좋겠습니다ㅜㅜ
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