001. The best way for a good future is to plan carefully when you are young. Do you agree or disagree? |
There is an argument regarding whether the best way for a good future is to plan carefully when people are young. Regarding the issue, some people insist that children are too young to prepare future. However I agree with the above statement for the following reasons. First, young people can prepare long time for future. Besides, they can start again. First, even the young people, they can prepare the future. Because they have a lot of time for prepare to successfully future.->because they have a lot of time to prepare for a successful future. For the successful life, people need to long time for preparing.->people need a long time for preparing. If people do not expend to enough time for preparing, they may be easy to fail. However, people spend a lot of time for preparing future since when they were younger. They can improve probability for successful future life. For example, Soo-mi Joe who is a famous soprano in the world (she삭제) hardly practiced much time for singing since when she was very young(er). Also she studied music. So, she could be successful to->as a soprano. As illustrated above, every people can prepare early for successful life, even when/though they are young. Because (of,삭제) they have a lot of time. That is why the youngest people can prepare long time for future. Second, the younger has a lot of chance for->to start again rather->more than the older. The older does not has->have much chance for restart. Because they (were삭제) already spent a chance for society working and finding own ability. However the younger still has a chance for restarting. 부족하지만 도움이 되실까 해서 조금 첨삭해보았습니다 시제와 단수복수, 동사활용 연습이 필요하신거같아요~ They just begin to prepare future. They have chance for finding own ability. Also they have chance for learning to useful technique. According to famous social researching company investigation, they said young education made children to find their taste of one’s. So children’s can get a lot of chance for challenge to various working or studying. Therefore if people want to get a lot of chance for restart, they must have to prepare when they are young. In this context, If people want the successful life, I think they must have to prepare long time from they were young. Then people can get a long time for preparing and chance for restarting. That’s why I argue that. |