Some people might believe that life would be happy when we got everything we want without having to struggle a bit. So they insist that if people have enough money, they do not need to work anymore. However, I believe strongly that working is indispensible factor in our life because people with no job would not be happy. Having a job has many benefits for people // Through the work they can build good relationship with others as well as they can archive achive their goals. These items are essential for the happiness of life. Thus, I agree with the statement that people do not work who have enough money are rarely happy.
People should work regardless of money since people could be happy when people make relationships with others. (people.. people... people.. people... 반복을 삼가해주세요 :) It is true that people can not live without helping and contacting interacting with other people. So a person who does not work might be completely isolated from society. For example, one of my neighbors who retried retired from his job is having a lonely life. He has enough money, there is are no worried worries about making a living. However, he always complains about how much he is bored and depressed everyday because he hardly talks to people except his wife. Finally, he gets a new job with no salary that is orphanage ministry. After working, he is having an active life with other people. In this case, working with other gives a chance to build a relationship that leads people to be happy.
During the work, people can fulfill their satisfaction. Although, doing a job is sometimes pretty tough for most of employees. People have to follow a strict duty and responsibility that make them stressed out and exhausted. They would think that if they have no job they will definitely be happy. However, I believe that attainment through hard working is overweight overweighs than stress from their work. If one devotes its to his job one can gain more valuable experience including being a profession in one’s filed or gaining a lot of knowledge and one might archive personal success. Thus, people should work even if they have sufficient money for their living since working is necessary to energize person’s life.
전체적으로 좋으나 다소 좀 광범위하게 맴돌기만하는 느낌이 있어보입니다. :)
Even though many people point out that working a job does not need when they have plenty of money. Having a job gives us more than precious time since we can have good friends with our peers and we can accomplish our personal goals during the work.
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