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A substantial number of people argue that in nowadays, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct since the present people want to end works immediately. However, from my point of view, people have to make work slowly and make the work precisely because it is safer and if works fast, people would lie to finish.
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First of all, there is nothing crucial factor than safe to do when doing something. If people should do their works rapidly, it would impossible to make errors and troubles which causes people are hurt and get in danger. For example, in South Korea, there was a big accident in a famous department. The department collapsed abruptly and consequently about 800 people who went shopping in there died and damaged. Later, a study revealed that the dreadful event was because of problem when construct the department. In those days, people wanted to complete quickly the building in accordance with the atmosphere of industrialization. As a result they built the building unsafely and inside of the department was hollow.
Moreover, there can be problems with honest. If people are asked to write paper in one hour, they would search the Internet to find papers that someone wrote already since they should put an end the writing, but they do not have time. Likewise, the idea which is finishing works rapidly can result in the distorted conscience. A survey which had done in Korea Seoul Institute shows that when made people put isolated place and took a test, they did were not honest. To be specific, the institute gave a math quiz which should be finished on in five minutes and went out from the room with putting answer paper on the desk in the place. The person who was solving the quiz could not do the work on time, and he saw the answer paper finally to do the work quickly.
To sum up, working slowly and correctly is more essential than working rapidly and risk making mistakes since safe is the most important. to do working and . Also there can be conscience matter if they want to finish works quickly.
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