토픽: Businesses should do anything to make money.
There is a no doubt that businesses and firms can help one society to grow economically. However, we should remember that there is the old saying,'Live and let live'. This indicates that people have to help others in order to success in their life. Of course it is important for businesses to make profit, but they should consider which comes more important; because their immoral acts can later become a hindrance in their business life not only to the society they are belong to but also to their own individual businesses.
Here is one hypothetical example: if it is financially beneficial to the business, is it inevitable to violate crimes or eradicate immoral acts such as murder or bribery? Can one's conscience justify such an inhumane behaviour by even if it helps him to earn a good money? My answer is no. It is not difficult to see politicians on televisions convicted of bribery, and they are usually related to businesses. As this indicates clearly, overall decline in quality of lives of people in our society is totally messed up under the name of materialism. This is unacceptable under any circumstances.
Furthermore, businesses and firms need consumers in order to survive from the fierce competition in the market, and a reputation and a good image is a crucial factor in businesses. Advertising is one of the methods to maximize this effect; to attract the customers. After all, consumers would not want to purchase the goods from the firms of a bad reputation. And the damaged reputation cannot be replaced by anything else. Some businesses' selfishness has cause pollution, corruption and disorder in the society, while some conscious businesses are taking noblesse-oblige into action; helping unprivileged and neglected members of the society. The consumers' support is on the latter in the competition.
To sum up, I believe businesses shoud differentiate right and wrong and refrain from immoral behaviour. It is not only beneficial for the society, but it is also a good marketting method for firms and businesses as well. Because, it is an immutable fact; 'One good turn deserves another.'
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