In these days, a substantial number of people asserts that playing game has negative influence on people eigher childrens or adult. I admit that gaming has a some drawbacks. However, I believe that it is overstated. This is because playing game teach role of life to us and It has positive influence on people's personality. In this sense, I agree that playing game offer us with education of life.
To begin with, playing a game has a pivotal role in learing way of life in particar to childrens. Generally speaking, the pattern of playing game can be able to compared with one of live in reality. For instance, player can gain money if they do sufficient efforts to obtaing them. Similary people have to severe endevor in order to make a lot of money. To illustrate, It is evidenced by study that people who play game skillfuly tend to show high jop performance. They know about the way of time management and efficient way to process their task.
In addition to, people are able to have a positive-mind to live by playing game since it provide self-confidence and aproproate way of making buman relationship well. game user can obtain personal bond by gaming and they often happy through rise a high posion in cyber place. these things may conduce to real-life. From my experience, I was passive in my childhood. However, I can make friend easily and have a optimistic mind after playing on-line gaming well.
To summarize, people can reap al lot of useful things to live real life and they has a positive infleunce on people's personality. In conclution, It's advantages far outweigh of disadvantages. For thesee reason, I storngly beleive that palying a game play a essentiall role in learning life.
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