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blue : need to confer some proper examples or reasons (e.g. researches) People have a tendency to be adventurous or to be a parvenu on account of zeal for the success, and this attitude usually requires us to put up with many hazards. Of course, it will do too if we commence these things having an ambition. But would it be necessary to do such a thing despite of unpredictability?
Provided I had to decide to buy either a house or a business, I might as well choose a house. As I mentioned, choosing a house has a lot of advantages in that they are more safety in earning money - though it is relatively progressive without haste - , and help us invest in land with eases. Likewise, it would be a great refuge for our family. We can be a so-called strategists by complementing a fatal shortcoming of having a house (instead of a business) which could be deficient in keeping up with the speed of business-interst. As constrasted with it, possessing a business also has some strong points - like the magnitude and the speed of interest rate in getting profits. But when it comes to having a business, it is unfolded differently from the former. Without prudence, we must fail to succeed. Or, just a bungle makes loss of returns. Not only do we have businesses, the others also have them. To win the competition, it requires too much policies, and when we lose the competition, it can be regarded as bankruptcy.
So, it is wise to stand by a house. We can do well with something looking trifling. Safety will compensate you for labor. It is important we be vigilant for a blemish, lest we should be a thoughtless parvenu.
Estimation : When you write an essay you should put your thoughts in logical organization. Your essay is less persuasive because of disturbed orders. < points : 1. Logical organization 2. To correct disturbed orders. Body 1. As I mentioned, choosing a house has a lot of advantages in that none of financial technology is safer than a real estate transaction - though it is relatively progressive without haste - , and help us invest in land with eases. Actually, a business cycle of real estate including houses are measurably long - it stretchs over a period of 17~20 years. >>부동산은 어떤 재테크 보다 안전하다. 또한 부동산을 담보로 얼마든지 융자가 가능하다. 부동산 경기는 일반 경기와는 다르게 주기가 굉장히 긴 17-20년이다. 또한 선진국일수록 부동산 가격은 오르지 않으며, 주기는 더욱 더 길며, 투자성은 더욱 더 안전하다. 부동산은 은행예금 보다 수십배의 수익을 낼 수 있으며, 증권보다는 수만배 안전한 투자 대상인 제테크다. 부동산은 절대적으로 예금이나, 주식 또는 채권보다는 더 안전하다. 제테크시 부동산의 종류와 지역적인 투자 및 개발가능한 지역에서의 투자가 더 많은 수익을 낼 수 있다. (출처 : 네이버 지식인 - 안전한 부동산 투자, 시대 흐름에 맞는 부동산 투자) Body 2. As contrasted with it, possessing a business also has some strong points - like the magnitude and the speed of interest rate in getting profits. With some investors, a business can make a great capital and becomes popular to produce a profit. But when it comes to having a business, it is unfolded differently from the former. Without prudence, we must fail to succeed.
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