주제는 It is better to have an intelligent friend than a friend who has a sense of humor이고요
제가 시작은 이렇게 썼는대 괜찮은지 고칠점은 뭔지 너무 식상한지도 좀 알려주세요!!
Some people said that it is better to have an intelligent freind than a friend who has a sense of humor. Personally , I disagree with that because I can have a good time with a friend who is very humorous and also I can forget about worries.