■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : If you have enough money to purchase either a house a business, you have to purchase a business. Do you agree or not? |
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Some people may argue that if we have
enough money to purchase either a house or a business, we have to choose a
business. However I have a different
idea. Personally, I would prefer buying a house to buying a business because I
think it has more advantages.
There more numerous reasons why I would
like to purchase a house, and I would in here explain a few of the most
important ones. The main reason is that it will make may benefits to our lives.
If you purchase a house, you will have a quiet, fixed place to do your own
business, for example, you can work at home, you can have a party with your
friends or relatives in your house and so on.
Another reason why I advocate the attitude
of purchasing a house is that I don't prefer risky work. Running a business means
risky and I don't like that sort of work. Salary man is suitable for me. If I
get same amount of money regularly, I could make a plan for my entire life. But
It's impossible to make a plan when I choose purchasing a business because I
can calculate my earning.
Last but not least, house is an essential
place for the strong family bond. When I was young, my family is very poor
since my father failed his business. We had to move very frequently so that we
didn't have enough time and place to communicate each other. Therefore
purchasing a house means that I realize one of my long-standing wish for strong
family bond.
Of course, choosing purchasing a business
also has advantages to some extent, for example, you can make yourself more
wealth and experienced. But if all these factors are contemplated, the
advantages of purchasing a house carry more weight than those of purchasing a
business. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the
conclusion that if you purchase a house, your life will be rich and colorful. | |
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