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Some people might say that procure a valuable item would be a better way to enjoy one's life because they put the highest value on the monetary. However, I believe that kinds of jewelry is surely not a viable approach to enjoy one's life, so considering the benefits of concert tickets, not buying the jewelry is much better for two main reasons; tighten friendship, and due to human nature.
The chief reason for my opinion is that one be more familiar with one's friends by concert tickets. This is because unlike with a jewelry, concerts can be enjoyed by other people especially people who are close to. Furthermore, sharing an experience makes tightens the relationship among people. For example, when I was in high school, my friends and I had hard time to study studying college entrance exams. Each day we built up so many stresses, so we need certain break time for to study harder on next day. We chose to purchase our favorite singer's concert tickets with money that our parents had given. Through exciting atmosphere together in the concert, we could build much bigger friendship because still, we cannot forget about the fun activity that we shared today.
Another important aspect of this is that human nature make one never satisfy with what he or she posses. This is because the human always want to more so our society has so many competitions on every section of our lives. For example, there was the one big issue in Korea in 2003 which was the suicide of one famous celebrity. He was worked at Samsung as high position, and earned enormous amount of money. But However he died because he committed suicide with by failing down at the top of his apartment. The reason was that he could not bear much stress in his job because he always had putted put effort to collect money. The psychology professor said that he finally felt emptiness and vacuum of collecting money which was his one major goal.
In conclusion, it is better to buy concert tickets. This is because it would bring good friendship, and has lot of meaning than purchasing jewelry. People who live in 21st century should consider what is really important for themselves.
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