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Borrowing money from friends harm the relationship
Who do you think at first when you need some money? Probably, it is friends. We can easily ask helps from friends because we have spent much time with them and shared a lot of things. Above all, we are friends that are bound under the friendship. However, I cannot say the right and I have strong object opinion about justification among friends. The reason is that not only does following money in friendly relationship make lose money, but also friends. In addition, people who are not familiar with refusal lend money regardless of themselves’ opinion.
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-처음에 질문으로 시작하지 말라는법은 없습니다마는, 여기서는 다소 연설문같은 느낌을 주네요.
-Above all, we are friends that are bound under the friendship에서 we는 누구를 지칭하는 것이며
갑자기 bound under the friendship이라는 결론은 어디서 나오는것인지 연결해주실 필요가 있어보입니다.
-문법오류가 여기저기 많이 눈에 띕니다. 예를들어 I cannot say the right 은 나는 권리를 말할 수 없다. 라는 뜻이고 I have strong object opinion은 나는 강한 물건 의견이 있다 라는 뜻입니다.
-regardless of their opinion이 맞습니다.
-familiar with refusal같은 표현은 어색하므로 people who have hard time refusing help calls 가 더자연스러워보입니다.
The first reason is that when people borrow money from the friend, they do not consider the unexpected situations. Sometimes, there are circumstances we emergently need money such as paying tuition-> where we emergently need moeny. iends without considering the later. However, if the situation that we cannot repay money by certain reasons come,-> However, for some reason if we cannot repay money , the man cannot help severing contacting-> relationship could be in serious trouble. It is the worst scenario. I have an experience like this situation-> I have such experience, and I have been regretting until now. When I worked as a police officer, my very closer friend asked me to borrow-> lend him some money. I had money for pay house lent-> rent, so I lent the money to the friend without any doubts. However, after two months, I was not able to see him again. He ran away from me and other friends because he could not repay money. I was really sad because I did not lose my money, but I missed my best friend. As a result, money is the key factor that destroys relationship among friends.
-> 문법오류가 다소 많으신 것 같습니다 조심해주세요 :)
Furthermore, someone have no skill that properly refuses a favor. To make matter worse, they cannot say that they want to repay their money. Thus, these people meet friends’ demands, though they cannot afford to lend money. In this case, these do not want to keep the relationship because they are repeatedly concerned about whether his/her friend asks borrowing money again or not. Therefore, they are not wanted to keep the relationship no longer, and as a case may be, some of friends may want to use this propensity as an opportunity for their profits. Consequently, avoiding following money with friends is the best way that keeps good relationship among the friends