▶ Your Answer :Some people say that it is better to have for teenagers to have jobs while they are still students. However, in my opinion, having jobs while they are students is not a great idea. This is because it could distract students focusing on studying and they are too young too to undergo through society.
To begin with, Some students start having jobs while they are students. To be specific, some students work for new experience and some students work for money. However, it is not really helpful thing to for students while they are students. Student's job is to study well so they can prepare for future career, but if they start working, then it would complicate them. For example, one of my friends started work last month. Firstly he was satisfy with his job and he seems like he could take control for both study and work. Nevertheless, his grade got lowered compare to time when he was not working and his parents started to worry about him. Therefore, it is evident that students should concentrate on studying rather than working while they are students.
On top of that, society is virtually dangerous than what teenagers think. In society, there is are numerous situation happening that is unthinkable especially for students. For instance, My cousin started working at small market while he was attending high-school. He worked due to since his family`s fiscal was not abundant. However, although he finished work after 1 one month, he could not get pay back receive wage from his boos. boss. The biggest reason was that he believed himself too much and he did not have much information about jobs and society. Consequently, before they have jobs, students should more concentrate on their studies study and prepare for future career to prevent this kind of problems.
To sum up, Some parents say that students should undergo works while they are students. This is because they do not know how much money is important and how hard it is to earn money. However, i believe students should focus on studying rather than working until attend high-school for their safety and future career.
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