Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. |
People become more and more interested in earning a lot of money. The lectures on investment strategy are always crowded and books on how to become rich are sold out quickly. However, I think there are more valuable things to pursue in life and money is not the only indicator of a person’s success. We cannot both have a cake and eat it, too. We cannot have all the good things from our lives. We must make a decision. Some people may choose to follow money and others may choose to spend more time with their family even if they should give up money for this. These decisions are personal choices and we cannot impose other values such as financial success on other people. Every decision should be respected. Next, there are so many things we cannot get with money. Let’s take an example of figure skater, Kim Yu-na. She is only 17 years old, but already won figure grand prix 2 times. Isn’t she successful? We cannot say “No”. She is very successful and her success and her medals are priceless. She didn’t get her success with money but through constant practice and sacrifice of other enjoyment. Also let’s consider just ordinary Korean mother in her sixties. She may not be rich. However, she successfully raised her children and gets respects and love from her children. While her effort and sacrifice also cannot be measured financially, she has lived truly successful life. In conclusion, money cannot be a single indicator of success. Which value one should pursue is a person choice and each choice should be respected. Also, there are many precious things which are not comparable to money.
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