Most students receive get an education in their schools. They usually acquire diverse knowledge and get many experiences in school. However, there is something they cannot be experience in a school. And While some people think schools should have purpose for students to stress the importance of study, I disagree with the following statement that more than 11 months of class in a school year can give students a better and more effective education.
To begin with, students cannot long vacation is the only chance for students to get more diverse experience outside except for long vacation. What students usually learn in school is limited to in their subjects like social science, science, and math and so on. But if they stay in their school for a long time, even though they can acquire knowledge of those subjects in detail, but they cannot learn would know how to use those subjects practically. I think the purpose to learn of learning diverse subjects is to utilize them in routine life. When I was an elementary school student, I could learn more by using knowledge which being acquired in my school when I went to a museum during my summer vacation. Thanks to the long summer vacation, I could learn not only learn what I couldn’t acquire in my school but also how to utilize what I have learned in school.
Besides, students would get more stress if they stay longer in school. Most schools wants all students to enter a good university. They are usually inclined to consider study teach hoping their students related to going to be accepted to a renowned university. This phenomenon forces to students to stay in their school and it often triggers them to get a lot of stress. It obviously contrasts of the following statement that more than 11 months of class in a school year can give students a better and more effective education. It would cause side effects for students such as not studying or sleeping in a school. Students will only feel less motivated and will often doze off in class due to tiredness. In case of students in South Korea, they usually study in school without vacation, but their grade is similar to the students in other nations who usually have appropriate period of vacation in other nations.
To conclude, I disagree with the following statement that more than 11 months of class in a school year can give students a better and more effective education due to lack of variety of experiences in a school and motivation to get more stress for students. I hope especially young students to have many experiences through long vacation and through using those experiences, they could learn something in detail and happily.