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Some people may like to live in one city or town because moving from one place to another place needs much work such as packing stuff and finding new place and so it could be irritating. However, I prefer to move from one place to another due to several advantages.
To begin with, the reason why I like moving from one place to another is that I can make many new friends. My personality is very outgoing, so I would like making new friends. When I went to US to study English, I made many international friends. Therefore, I could easily learn English and adopt adapt new life in U.S because they tough taught me about their life style.
Second, people can experience and get learn new culture. Each towns town has their own culture such as a traditional dance, food, and art. For example, Chicago has beautiful buildings and structure which can't be seen in other cities. In Korea, I live in small city. But,However(But을 문장 시작할때 쓰면 좋지 않아요) when I studied in college in Seoul, I could experience many things that I couldn't experience at my home town such as seeing sports game, visiting museum, and participating in various festivals. According to these factors, I would like to move from one place to another place to experience new things.
In sum, some people might prefer to live in one city or town due to some reasons. However, even if moving from one place to another place is hard and irritating, I would like to move because I could make many friends who make me grow and experience new culture.
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