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Some people say that having an intelligent friend is better than having a funny friend. Others may agree to with this; however, I personally disagree with the above statement for two reasons. First, I can have vivid memory with my humorous friend, and second funny friend helps me to overcome hardship.
To begin with, having fun time with a friend is more likely to have memorable time. The reason is that if I talk to with serious people with heavy topics, that type of conversation is not memorable than funny conversation. Coming from my personal experience, I have one friend who is exceedingly hilarious. Whenever I study or play sports with my funny friend, he always tells me jokes or funny stories. Since I have had so much good time with him, I always have good memories with him.
In addition, being with a humorous friend helps me to overcome hardship. This is because I always had hard times during my freshman year in university for grades. However, I could do well in getting grades since my friend always tells me funny stories and relieved my stress. helps me to relieve stress.
In conclusion, humorous friend is more likely to have memorable time, and it helps me to overcome hardship. Considering the above two statements, it is evident that it is better to have a funny friend that than intelligent friend.
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